




"Soul Reaver takes place within the fictional world of Nosgoth.Nosgoth is now a redirect to the series article, could you fix the 'Main article' link to point at the overview section of that article?.The ability section has several uses of the word 'acquire' or variances of it, could you reword it slightly to remove a few?.Players can acquire the ability" The word ability is used twice in quick succession. "As players progress through the game, they acquire numerous other abilities.Abilities sub-heading - necessary? If some redundancy was removed these two paragraphs could be merged together.in destroying enemies is used twice, reword to remove redundancy please. "Gameplay in Soul Reaver relies largely on shifting between the physical material realm and the ghostly spectral realm." Hang on, this is the very first sentence of gameplay but instead of giving readers a broad overview of what takes place they're instead lead into a single aspect of play without any context.Left-aligned images shouldn't be directly underneath level-2 headers, can you move it a little further down please.Could you add a little more detail to the reception aspect of the lead? I know it needs to take a distal view but a single sentence is a little on the short side.Using 'first game' at all points to there being some further relationship when there isn't one. Altered but not fixed, something more along the lines of Silicon Knights creating the original game is needed."It is the second game in the Legacy of Kain series and the first game in the series not developed by Silicon Knights." According to the other game articles Crystal Dynamics have created all of them with the exception of the original, this statement makes it sound as though Silicon Knights has an ongoing stake in the series when in fact it's responsible for Blood Omen only.There's no mention of the dreamcast port/release in the first paragraph.Images are fine except that some of the fair use templates are not fully completed (IE portion used and replaceable), the images are not replaceable so I'd just label them as such.
